Monday, March 16, 2020
Why its Important to Write Right in the Legal Profession â⬠And 5 Common Writing Pitfalls to Avoid
Why its Important to Write Right in the Legal Profession ââ¬â And 5 Common Writing Pitfalls to Avoid The following article, by Brenda Bernstein, was first published on MyLegal.com. In a well-publicized case, a federal judge in Florida denied a lawyerââ¬â¢s motion (without prejudice, so he can re-file the motion) stating that it was ââ¬Å"riddled with unprofessional grammatical and typographical errors that nearly render the entire motion incomprehensible.â⬠Read the full article here: Judge Labels Lawyers Motion Nearly Incomprehensible, Marks Up Errors ABA Journal The judge highlighted the following problems, among others: Incorrect use of apostrophes. Typographical errors (using the word ââ¬Å"thisâ⬠instead of ââ¬Å"thusâ⬠and the word ââ¬Å"fullâ⬠instead of ââ¬Å"forâ⬠). Incorrect placement of periods and commas outside of quotation marks. Wrong word use (using the phrase the plaintiff ââ¬Å"had attended on filingâ⬠this action, instead of saying the plaintiff had ââ¬Å"intendedâ⬠to file an action). One very long sentence. Donââ¬â¢t let this happen to you! If you write legal documents in any way, shape or form, it is absolutely essential to use correct spelling and grammar. In a famous case in England, a traffic ticket was thrown out because it was issued for illegal ââ¬Å"stopingâ⬠instead of ââ¬Å"stoppingâ⬠; the alleged perpetrator had conducted no mining activities (ââ¬Å"stopingâ⬠is a mining term) and so was found not guilty. I bet that police officer never issued another ââ¬Å"stopingâ⬠ticket. Past or Present? One extremely common error I see amongst law students is using the word ââ¬Å"leadâ⬠to mean the past tense of ââ¬Å"lead.â⬠This mistake could get you in trouble, since the past tense of ââ¬Å"leadâ⬠is ââ¬Å"ledâ⬠(with no a). You could be writing in the wrong tense! Example or Complete List? Another place you can easily convey the wrong meaning is with ââ¬Å"i.e.â⬠and ââ¬Å"e.g.â⬠When you use ââ¬Å"i.e.â⬠it means ââ¬Å"that isâ⬠or ââ¬Å"in other words.â⬠The proper way to follow ââ¬Å"i.e.â⬠is with a definition or complete list. For example: The defendant was charged with illegal stoping, i.e., mining activity. ââ¬Å"E.g.â⬠means ââ¬Å"for example.â⬠The proper way to follow ââ¬Å"e.g.â⬠is with a partial list of possibilities. For example: The motion was denied for bad grammar, e.g., typographical errors and wrong word use. If ââ¬Å"i.e.â⬠were used here, we would need to provide a complete list of the examples of bad grammar. (For a more thorough explanation of i.e. and e.g., read my post Common Grammatical Errors: Should You Use i.e. or e.g.?) Law or Liberty? Do you know the difference between a statute and a statue? Statutes are laws. Statues are sculptures. We have statutes of limitations and a Statue of Liberty. Donââ¬â¢t get these confused. You might want to remember the extra ââ¬Å"tâ⬠for ââ¬Å"timeâ⬠when itââ¬â¢s a statute of limitations, or for ââ¬Å"textâ⬠when itââ¬â¢s any written law. And you might think of following those statutes to a ââ¬Å"Tâ⬠(or 3)! Proper Punctuation: Periods and Commas Inside Quotation Marks To touch on one of the Florida judgeââ¬â¢s beefs, periods and commas, in the United States, always go inside quotation marks, even when they are not part of the quotation, e.g., The defendant was arrested for ââ¬Å"illegal stoping.â⬠Although there are rare exceptions to this rule, they will probably not appear in legal writing (they are more likely to show up in technical writing). For a detailed discussion of this issue, see my blog post The Quandary of Quotation Marks ( ). Proper Punctuation: Apostrophes Many people incorrectly use apostrophes to make plural words. Donââ¬â¢t do it! Did you notice that the plural of apostrophe is NOT ââ¬Å"apostropheââ¬â¢sâ⬠? It is ââ¬Å"apostrophesâ⬠! The plural words lawyers, judges, laws, statutes, DUIs and the 1990s do NOT take apostrophes. Use an apostrophe and then an ââ¬Å"sâ⬠to make a singular possessive. The lawyerââ¬â¢s brief was riddled with errors. The judgeââ¬â¢s ruling was final. Use an ââ¬Å"sâ⬠and then an apostrophe to make a plural possessive. The five lawyersââ¬â¢ arguments diverged widely. All the county judgesââ¬â¢ courtrooms contain the latest in audio-visual equipment. Put your apostrophes in the right place ââ¬â and avoid annoying the judge. So Many Chances to Err! There are multiple ways to make writing errors in legal documents, and I have only covered a few. My most important advice is to proofread and proofread again! Get a second pair of eyes to check your work. If you have grammar questions you want answered, I will answer them to the best of my ability in the comments section of this blog. I look forward to hearing from youâ⬠¦ Happy writing!
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